Eddie, I'm pleased to see that you have clearly spent some time coming back to your blog and improving the posts that you had in 'Research' - and making the effort to add in some on=f the ones that were missing for this section. I am glad you seem to have realised that you need to invest more effort in free periods and at home to keep the blog updated - but there is still work to be done.
Research & planning will be marked for a FINAL time from Mon 7th Feb. At this stage, your blog is incomplete. Some posts are missing, and there is not enough visual material - It is not a 'B' standard. I would say a Low D at this stage as too many important posts are still missing.
To improve - you will need to work no the following before Monday:
Research:
Posts 3 & 4 missing?
Post 11 - Wallander - missing?
Post 14 - Conventions of your genre - make this visual by taking the time to create a mood board / collage of screen shots of films in your genre to SHOW the conventions - this post could be a good visual one if you bother...
16, 17, 18 - Location and Audience research - ???
Planning:
1 - Initial ideas?
3-4 - see comments in blog
5 - Storyboards need uploading
6 - needs photos of props, costumes, etc, etc..
8-11 - missing???
Referral - Stage 1 and phone call home if not sorted out completely by Mon 7th - you have had more than enough time to complete.
SJA Feb 3rd
SJA Feb 3rd
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