Script
In our opening sequence there is no dialogue but there is a phone message that is left in a panic tone. The message left will be along the lines of warning the character of Jay that he is in trouble and needs to escape. But through the film we learn that the partner Carly really set him up with her secret lover Will.
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Saturday, January 29, 2011
Friday, January 28, 2011
props, locations, costumes
Props:
→ A Knife – covered in blood to show that it’s the murder weapon.
→ Home Phone – this when Carly leaves the message, almost a way to help the audience at what is happening.
→ A Ring – On Jays finger showing that he is the victim at first then cutting to his normal life.
→ Books, Paper, Glass & Picture Frame – shows that one of the characters is an artist and the titles will appear on them e.g. producer, composer, etc.
Costumes:
The death scene:
→ Jay will be covered in blood and mud, the clothing, which was fancy will also be ripped showing that something bad has happened to him, and this can make the audience think about what has happened and why would it happen.
→ The two killers Carly and Will would be in dark clothing almost to show that they are hiding something.
The house scene:
→ Jay is wearing normal, everyday clothing to show the viewer that nothing is wrong and doesn’t hint at that he will be murdered.
Locations:
→ River/Woodland – This location is where the murder scene is and it’s a nice place for the opening of a thriller as it creates a sinister atmosphere making the viewer question at what has happened. Also, the woodlands can suggest that the death scene is empty; it’s a vast space where no one could help Jay.
→ House (bathroom/bedroom) – This location almost breaks the creepy, sinister atmosphere and bringing the mood back too an everyday life, which makes the viewer feel a lot more comfortable.




→ A Knife – covered in blood to show that it’s the murder weapon.
→ Home Phone – this when Carly leaves the message, almost a way to help the audience at what is happening.
→ A Ring – On Jays finger showing that he is the victim at first then cutting to his normal life.
→ Books, Paper, Glass & Picture Frame – shows that one of the characters is an artist and the titles will appear on them e.g. producer, composer, etc.
Costumes:
The death scene:
→ Jay will be covered in blood and mud, the clothing, which was fancy will also be ripped showing that something bad has happened to him, and this can make the audience think about what has happened and why would it happen.
→ The two killers Carly and Will would be in dark clothing almost to show that they are hiding something.
The house scene:
→ Jay is wearing normal, everyday clothing to show the viewer that nothing is wrong and doesn’t hint at that he will be murdered.
Locations:
→ River/Woodland – This location is where the murder scene is and it’s a nice place for the opening of a thriller as it creates a sinister atmosphere making the viewer question at what has happened. Also, the woodlands can suggest that the death scene is empty; it’s a vast space where no one could help Jay.
→ House (bathroom/bedroom) – This location almost breaks the creepy, sinister atmosphere and bringing the mood back too an everyday life, which makes the viewer feel a lot more comfortable.


Location:
- River/Woodland – This location is where the murder scene is and it’s a good place for the opening of a thriller as it creates a sinister atmosphere making the viewer question what has happened. Also, the woodlands can suggest that the death scene is empty; it’s a vast space where no one could help Jay.
- House (bathroom/bedroom) – This location almost breaks the creepy, sinister atmosphere and bringing the mood back too an everyday life, which makes the viewer feel a lot more comfortable.
Storyboard




This is our group story board of each scene and shot we are going to be using to structure our film opening. this is a really detailed storyboard so that we can get are film composed very effectively. The story boards evan has how we are going to use are titles and how we are going to do it on imovie.
Thursday, January 27, 2011
Sound
Sound
→ Footsteps – walking away from the murder scene, shows how quite the scene is making it more creepy. and also by using a sound for the foot steps it creates a silence in the film that creates an atmosphere and genre or a thriller.
→ Footsteps – walking away from the murder scene, shows how quite the scene is making it more creepy. and also by using a sound for the foot steps it creates a silence in the film that creates an atmosphere and genre or a thriller.
→ Breathing – to increase the tension in the opening and making the audience feel scared as the breathing would be used in an effective way to show the characters feelings.
→ Alarm Clock – used as a sound bridge to break up the scenes. And also the alarm changes the continuity of the scene change as it goes form a scene of crime to a humble stereotypical bedroom or house.
→ Shower – makes the opening more everyday, almost reassuring the viewer, that these people that its showing in the shower have a lot of camera time are possibly are main characters
→ Phone Calling – the audience questions, who is calling and why? and it keeps in suspense till the sound stops or it is answered
→ Answer Phone Message – increases the tension amongst the audience, and it almost gives them more clues, to what is going on in the plot. Also it creates a scenario that the audience want to reveal and find out about, so they carry on watching.
- http://www.freesound.org/samplesViewSingle.php?id=15562- foot steps
- http://www.freesound.org/samplesViewSingle.php?id=33987-alarm clock
- http://www.freesound.org/samplesViewSingle.php?id=44594-phone call tone
Wednesday, January 26, 2011
Shot List
→ Close up shows emotions, to show shots of everyday things like Jay turning off the alarm clock. in this picture it shows a close up of a woman;s face as you can see there is so scenery shown but there is all here emotions and eels shown.

→ Establishing shot – sets the scene, can be used to show where the characters are showing if it’s an everyday scene or not.
→ Tracking shot – follows action, plan to use this when characters Will and Carly walk away from murder scene.
→ Extreme close up – more detail in the frame, we will use this to show body parts of the dead body to keep the viewer questioning at what has happened.
→ Pan shot – shows the scene while camera is still, can show the shot of Jay’s bedroom with the titles appearing on the screen.
→ Focus pull – main object stands out, can use this in the shot of the knife to show that this is the object that hurt Jay.
→ Establishing shot – sets the scene, can be used to show where the characters are showing if it’s an everyday scene or not.
→ Tracking shot – follows action, plan to use this when characters Will and Carly walk away from murder scene.
→ Extreme close up – more detail in the frame, we will use this to show body parts of the dead body to keep the viewer questioning at what has happened.
→ Pan shot – shows the scene while camera is still, can show the shot of Jay’s bedroom with the titles appearing on the screen.
→ Focus pull – main object stands out, can use this in the shot of the knife to show that this is the object that hurt Jay.
Tuesday, January 25, 2011
Film synopsis
Film synopsis
The two main characters, Jay and Carly, are a married couple. Then one day Jay receives a distressing phone call from Carly, however Jay doesn’t hear this message as he is in the shower. After showering he listens to the message but he doesn’t know where Carly has gone, almost like she has disappeared. Then Jay sets out to find her; but along the way he becomes the main target for Carly and her secret lover Will. Although in the end it results Jay in dying, being stabbed by his exe wife and her lover all for his money/fortune.
Opening Sequence Synopsis – Deceit
In the opening sequence of ‘Deceit’ we firstly see the 3 main characters Jay, Carly and Will, but we see the dead body of Jay then Carly and Will walking away from the body. But then it quickly cuts to the alarm clock where we see Jay and Carly together as a couple and living a normal life. While Jay is in the shower Carly leaves a phone message (almost setting him up) and then disappears. This leaves the audience questioning at what will happen to Jay, and then what is Carly up to?
The two main characters, Jay and Carly, are a married couple. Then one day Jay receives a distressing phone call from Carly, however Jay doesn’t hear this message as he is in the shower. After showering he listens to the message but he doesn’t know where Carly has gone, almost like she has disappeared. Then Jay sets out to find her; but along the way he becomes the main target for Carly and her secret lover Will. Although in the end it results Jay in dying, being stabbed by his exe wife and her lover all for his money/fortune.
Opening Sequence Synopsis – Deceit
In the opening sequence of ‘Deceit’ we firstly see the 3 main characters Jay, Carly and Will, but we see the dead body of Jay then Carly and Will walking away from the body. But then it quickly cuts to the alarm clock where we see Jay and Carly together as a couple and living a normal life. While Jay is in the shower Carly leaves a phone message (almost setting him up) and then disappears. This leaves the audience questioning at what will happen to Jay, and then what is Carly up to?
Monday, January 24, 2011
InItial Ideas
Are initial ideas were done as a group as we all put are own aspects of a thriller opening on one page.
we had various ideas for the story line and also a lot of ideas about our cinematography. the sound was a main concert of deciding our actual story-line as we were trying to figure out what would sound better with speech in the opening or not would it be effective as a opening to our film.
Saturday, January 8, 2011
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